Lack of attention to detail. person with no identity, distinguished or not. only blank spots. reading stories. unnamed characters probably swish through the contours of her mind. they overlap. disconnected, incoherent patches. alternating voids. flat voids.
Few tactile structures. subjects. State, race, colour, sexual organ. being.
Rest, undifferentiated, unidentifiable. A blob.

Adherence, coherence, structure and punctuation are constricting.
That will be my excuse.